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Mirabelle's avatar

I liked that Vargos wasn't horrified by the stew itself, he was furious that she'd tried to fool him. That felt very true to the character you'd built. Was that always the twist you had in mind, or did it change as you wrote?

Gregory Blair's avatar

This is an extremely well-wrought tale of surprises!

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